It was loads of fun,lol. The way the story is written isn't the way I'm used to, but it's still pretty good. Don't give up on your writing. Get out to that shed and pull out those old, moldering stories and get to it!! :rose:
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06/09/08
What a wild ride!
Rough and tumble, lickety-split from beginning to end.
English
Great race! :o)
It was loads of fun,lol. The way the story is written isn't the way I'm used to, but it's still pretty good. Don't give up on your writing. Get out to that shed and pull out those old, moldering stories and get to it!! :rose:
What a wild ride!
Rough and tumble, lickety-split from beginning to end.
Naughty sex with a sweet taste.
Well done!
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