All Comments on 'Ghost Train'

interesting

Fun story, would have liked a little more development of the whole ghost story, but definitely a good read. Wish I had a servant like Rebecca.

Keep writing.

Very well written, but the names all starting with r was a bit confusing. Great story.

Would've felt happier If Robert was in his 20's... it seems like it's written by a 50 year old uncle... If you want to have fantasy then please don't fantasy on younger girls... it's sounds paedophilish ... fantasy about women around your ages or 11 year younger is alright also but no but 40 year, 30 year younger girls... it is gross & sick... please make Robert younger... young boys should be with young girls & uncles should be with Aunties... If you want your story to attract teenage or younger adults (18 to 24, 24 -30) then make Robert in his late 20's or early 20's, make Robert a handsome guy with looks of the model actor Ranbir Kapoor, & that maid should have the looks of Ariana Grande & that girl should have the looks of Taylor Swift