All Comments on 'Jungle Man'

Thank GOD! for a minute there I thought Alano might be the main character & I couldn't see how you would ever redeem him,

I cant wait to read more about Manolito...come back soon!!

i also couldn't believe that alano could be the main charcter you did a thorough assassination on him and then in the nick of time manolito shows up YEA!!!!!

he going to have his worked cut out for him.

It was OK but I advise you to learn a bit more about the rainforest, jungle and appropriate clothing...

No rapist deserves to live

Yea you had me fooled for a while there. I really thought that Alano was going to be the main character :)

And now this new sexy jungle man showed up... well... i do hope you can continue writing more chapters. I really want to know what happens now :)

I am excited to learn what happens next. Long chapters, please! And more elaboration on the story! Keep up the great work, from one writer to another.

This was a great start. I am very interested in seeing the rest! Please please please finish it! :-)

Great! I can't wait to see what happens next. And to the person who said no rapist deserves to live, while I generally agree with your comment, Manolito hasn't done anything to Clara (yet anyway) except save her from pondscum. If you feel that way, why are you even reading in the nonconsent category?

Don't leave me hangin'! Write, write!

It started out a little like the tarzan cartoon, but far more interesting and with far more depth. I can't wait to see what the jungle man's personality is like and how they relate to each other...and what trouble the jerk brews...

Manolito is a Tarzan-wannabe, only w/a club!

lol i take it ur a christine feehan fan

The story is ok, but you badly need editing. For instance conscience does not mean consciousness. There are many other mistakes; so many that reading is an unpleasant chore.

Don't you people ever get some new ideas? Your writing style is atrocious and you don't seem to posses an iota of creativity or imagination. File this under the hundreds more that are EXACTLY the same.

Pure garbage.

I love this story!!

Great description and detail, makes it easy to visualize the scene and really get into the story. I have to admit, like many other reviewers I was afraid Alano would be the main character and was thoroughly relieved when Manolito showed up in time to rescue her from a most unpleasant situation. Hopefully Manolito will a bit more gentlemanly in showing his affections :)

Wow, I can't wait to read more of the story! Awesome!

Monkeys, like other primates do not have claws but nails like ourselves.