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A Tale Of Two Jerry's

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by chargergirl04/06/08

A very sensual beginning...

Poor Karen, what conflicting emotions she's dealing with. I'm looking forward to seeing how she sorts this out in her mind and how she ultimately deals with it. I really hope you continue with this.

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by Plainly_Jane04/06/08

I agree, very sensual

I think you captured a woman's thoughts very well, such as her looking at herself in the mirror and at first thinking, "hey not bad," then as she undresses further she doesn't really like the whole package and turns away.

I also hope you continue with the story. Can she jumpstart things with her current boyfriend, bring back the excitement they once had? Very nice!

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