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by LeBroz04/02/08

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This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.



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by KOLKORE04/02/08

the dancing of words

You allow the words to match the theme in delicately dancing between the one -two three four words lines. We follow the swift progress of the romance.

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by tickledkitty04/22/08

Lovely...

...and seemingly effortless. Love it.

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by tazz31712/17/11

UNTIL THE SCABS CAME

and took it away. TK U MLJ LV NV

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