All Comments on 'The Serpent's Embrace'

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CarelessLoveCarelessLoveabout 16 years ago
Please write more.

I love snakes and you combined it with something else I love. Well done. I hope you write more on this story because I want to know what she sees and if she'll escape...if she'll even want to?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
More?

This is so unique, in the good way. It's an original peice, and I'd love if you made a sequel.

cuddlesluttcuddlesluttover 15 years ago
more please

Unique can't wait for a second chapter.

ImmortalRomanceImmortalRomanceover 15 years ago
Great Descriptions

As the others wrote, this is a very unique story idea. I read your second chapter first and liked both very much. Hope you will continue with this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I want more of this story as well please because I want to see and read if she got pregnant by the serpent and if she did get pregnant I wander how many little serpents/snakes she is going to have. And if she gets pregnant by him/his offspring for all eternity non stop forever and ever.So please more chapters of this story as well as more pages if a whole book about it. Thank you very much.

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