I like where I hope you are heading with this story. I do feel like you rushed this introduction a little, but perhaps if you do any further installments, you can do a little more detail.
I don't read the incest stories often and yet I wonder why not, because every time I do, I find myself more aroused than I should be...*blushes* A very nice read, quick and to the point. It did have a warm, wet effect on me, which I have to admit is a good thing for me and my toys. ;) Thanks for sharing. ~ Red.
I'm not much into Daddy-daughter incest stories -- but that's neither here nor there -lol. You got right to the point of the story, which was first time sex between dad and daughter. Overall, you kept the pace consistent, and the narrative was concise. Nicely executed.
Meg, this story is great! Keep it up. I like this one more than part 1..just don't ask me why. lol It was just better! I can't wait to see what you write next!
Very nice! You captured her naivite very good and also Daddy playing to be the good one. Great that the next part is already online, I would have hated waiting for it!
Its hard to believe you critics think amateurish stuff like this is good. We're supposed to believe a virgin would let her dad run his hands inside her pants for ANY reason? The girl says: daddy this, daddy that like if a 12-year old was writing a first essay in Mrs. Brown's class.Maybe better readers could make better authors.
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Anonymous10/27/11
wow...
LOVED it!! I had to attack my husband WHILE I read it! One of my favs in awhile! Damn fine writing there Meg1! I came so hard I squirted! Thanks! A fabulous writer to inspire me!
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Add the brother to the mix
I like where I hope you are heading with this story. I do feel like you rushed this introduction a little, but perhaps if you do any further installments, you can do a little more detail.
*wicked grin...*
I don't read the incest stories often and yet I wonder why not, because every time I do, I find myself more aroused than I should be...*blushes* A very nice read, quick and to the point. It did have a warm, wet effect on me, which I have to admit is a good thing for me and my toys. ;) Thanks for sharing. ~ Red.
Nice
A lovely first submission. Please do more.
Meg you rock!
Wonderful story! This is awesome~ I can't wait for part two!
nice start, meg
Great first submission, and here's hoping you include the brother. ;) Can't wait to read more from you.
Nice first story Meg
I'm not much into Daddy-daughter incest stories -- but that's neither here nor there -lol. You got right to the point of the story, which was first time sex between dad and daughter. Overall, you kept the pace consistent, and the narrative was concise. Nicely executed.
you...
...dirty girl! *grin*
Nicely done!
Great details and descriptions. You tell a very good story.
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There's going to be another chapter, right, right? Please!
I love it!
Meg, this story is great! Keep it up. I like this one more than part 1..just don't ask me why. lol It was just better! I can't wait to see what you write next!
A very nice one!
Very nice! You captured her naivite very good and also Daddy playing to be the good one. Great that the next part is already online, I would have hated waiting for it!
come on now
Its hard to believe you critics think amateurish stuff like this is good. We're supposed to believe a virgin would let her dad run his hands inside her pants for ANY reason? The girl says: daddy this, daddy that like if a 12-year old was writing a first essay in Mrs. Brown's class.Maybe better readers could make better authors.
wow...
LOVED it!! I had to attack my husband WHILE I read it! One of my favs in awhile! Damn fine writing there Meg1! I came so hard I squirted! Thanks! A fabulous writer to inspire me!
Very hot.
I loved the way this was written. It was very titillating. I very much enjoyed it.
Wow
I'm like wet right meg!!! Wow and I can't wait to masterbate more to your stories.
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