I Saw Her at the Party

Pretty good

This is a good story and told well, except for the tense chane at the end which throws off the reader.Aa

Good story but he asked as she was blowing him is it bigger than his so much bigger I don't think I could give it up. Sounds like she's been doing this with him for a while

So, more on Jason and his life after Sarah.

so?

is she a liar or just stupid?

"So much bigger! I can't give this cock up! It's so wonderful!" she said.
sort of implies she's had it before and will do again.

or is she really so dumb as to think "gee sucking a guy off at my fiances party will be great! what could possibly go wrong?"

is she a liar or really that dumb? it not made clear in the story so are we to assume both?