All Comments on 'He Was In Charge The Whole Time'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
copyediting

This story was pretty good, but I found that the main thing that could be improved was copyediting - the mistakes were misued words (e.g., "wondering" instead of "wandering") and not something that a spellchecker would catch, so just having another pair of eyes go over it would be best. These mistakes were distracting from the story.

hotkisserhotkisserover 14 years ago
Hot Story!

I love your story and hope to read more like it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Please continue! I'd like to see you enjoy both Sandy and Bob together!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Proof read

Nice story' but did you even bother to proof read it? So many easily fixed errors that took away from the story.

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