This chapter was outstanding! Erick's love and worry and guilt at having left Matilda for so long. Eleanors'realization that she loves Bruni, his that he loves her. And the tease that Varin who already loves Anika will have that love change and grow as she does. You have such a great villians in Sibbe and her nasty daughter! I don't know how you keep making each chapter better than the last but please don't stop!
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Anonymous04/09/08
truly wonderful
I agree you have such a way of making each one better than the last keep it up..you have so many places to go in this story I'm loving it and can't wait for you to write more soon..I need my story fix..keep it up.
English
wow!
moooooooooooore, please!
yes!
more please, and don't forget Corine!
WOW
This chapter was outstanding! Erick's love and worry and guilt at having left Matilda for so long. Eleanors'realization that she loves Bruni, his that he loves her. And the tease that Varin who already loves Anika will have that love change and grow as she does. You have such a great villians in Sibbe and her nasty daughter! I don't know how you keep making each chapter better than the last but please don't stop!
truly wonderful
I agree you have such a way of making each one better than the last keep it up..you have so many places to go in this story I'm loving it and can't wait for you to write more soon..I need my story fix..keep it up.
Best yet Angel
Hard to make a judgement, but I think this is the best chapter yet Angel, quite superb.
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