by scrawlspace
Reminds me of the first time my wife and I wend to a swinger's club. There is nothing ever like the first time. The author totally captures the excitement and sensuality of that first experience with a different person outside your marriage. Thanks for sharing
I enjoy this well used story line, but I hate this text. Why must you involve the reader?? Don't say "YOU" referring to ME. I am not a girl. I just want to read a good story.
I loved this story. Short, simple, good action. Can't wait to read more.
Mmmm, we really liked this story, lovely build up and continued to exite