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Hot table turned
Tasty and lusty story. And, I'm picky about my girl-on-girl stories. Ignore "Anonymous from the South." Keep on writing. I enjoy dialog with my stories. Good show!
mmm great!
this is hot, definitely should be writing a chapter two.
Hot
I agree, you need another chapter at least..
okay
I'm stuck....thats it....boo
:(
That was a little anti-climactic. I mean, come on. You can't stop half-way through their sexual encounter.
Love it
I loved where this story was going, but it was a bit cruel to cut it off like that to the reader. I swear I almost cried (jk lol)
All in all, a very good story. Perhaps if you expanded it a little bit more past the intimate sex part, some of the readers could have been a bit more satisfied.
A good place to cut it of, hinting at a part two maybe, could have been Hannah's boyfriend walking in on the two?
Keep up the awesomeness!!
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