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Hooray!
Very nice, but very short. Hopefully you'll make up for that in the next installment. ;)
love it
so glad you have finally posted another update on a story! great ending for this chapter, especially with the distinction between vampire and human side of the same person. can't wait till you post the next update, i'll continue checking...
too good
to be that short...
*BIG SMILES*
A wonderful tender chapter so beautifully written. This was a great treat to wake up to this morning Thank you.
Worth Waiting For
You certainly make up for the wait (some of us have become addicted to your stories)with depth, and pain, and the sensual pleasures that you have given these two lovers. I can't help but wonder what the future holds for them, hopefully someway for Rillan to break the cruse that he has had to bear for so long, letting him find peace with Mira. Ah, but that would be my ending, I'll have to wait for yours.
thank you!
Thank you for adding the next chapter! I'm getting more and more into the characters and the plot, cheers!
Uh...
More please? Pretty Please?
Excellent!
Now get back to work on the next chapter!!
So wonderful
The bath scene was lovely, and their lovemaking exquisite.
Made me a little teary eyed
This is so well told! Very emotional, very pationate! Great writing.
Thx,
Dianne
Great!
I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
How did I miss this??? Awesome....
I stumbled onto this story accidently and I am so glad that I did. It is beautifully written and I can literally feel the emotion. I had to go back and read the other ones!! Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
So glad your back!!!
Great chapter. Please continue with this one and update soon. Also, please,please,please give us an update on Cullen, Aislinn and the clan.
yey!
ur back with another chapter of this wonderful story...please keep on writing...its one of the best stories ive ever read..tnx
one of the not so patient fans here :)
thanx sooooooooooooooooooo much for this. i'm hooked!
Yaahahahahah
I am soooo happy your back and writing. Can't wait for the next chapter. I love this story so much.
woot
*happydance* thank you! this one rocked!
HI!!!!
says in an ovaltine kind of commercial voice with pleading in her eyes, "MORE STORY PLEASE!!!!!" come on another chapter please! Dude, or Dudette, do you realize you could turn this into a freaking book?! I love it! More More More! MORE!!!!!! please. ^_^
Yes!!!!
I'm so glad you're back. This was the perfect chapter. I can't wait for the next ones! (And I'm eagerly awaiting more Cullen and Aislinn and wittens toooo!)
wonderful..
I have read through all your stories and I love them all. I am very glad you continued this one...I can't wait to see what happens next.
:)
god ive missed your writings thanks for the read it was wonderful like usual write soon i shall be keeping on the look out for your works of art -Merc
:)
Your stories are so well written. I love them, I enjoy reading them. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Please, More!!!
Mira is the first series of yours that I read, and I ADORE IT!!! Your premise is wicked, your characters are electric, buzzing with life and your words are fabulous!
I find myself wanting, badly, to know much more about these two. Your Heroine, Mira, is inspired and endearing; one can't help but feel for her. While she may be the "sacrifice" for her people's Vampiric assassin, she is a true Hero, showing exceptional fortitude, strength of spirit and courage. While her humility may prevent herself from recognizing it, she is far more than "average."
Rillan is entirely correct, Mire is uniquely special and deserving of so much more, more blessings and a much greater life. She is too special to waste below the earth, shut out from life.
I really hope you continue with this series till its conclusion. I'm quite taken by this story. I hope to read more of you soon.
Most Satisfactory!
more
please don't leave this story unfinished it's too good to stop now.. i do hope you finish it soon.. i keep looking daily to see if you might have added a new chapter yet..i still hope you finish it soon..
MORE MORE GOOD GOD ALMIGHTY GIVE ME MORE
By All The Gods You must FINISH THIS STORY, ONLI IF POSSIBLE. But talented people like you make it so much easier for sexally restrained people such as i to live that much longer
MORE PLEASE!!!!!
I could die of waiting for more please this story is soo wonderful I have read all your stories so far and can't wait for more of this one please come back and finish it...
I find...
...myself talking about this series to my friends. Its so awesome, I relay what is going on at the coffee shop by memory and people listen...this story is truly a treasure.
lovely story
I really liked reading your story. I liked it because it was more sensual. The charectors in the story were attracted to eachother by more than what many writers write as, "large tatas and a nice pussy". I liked how there were more emotions they felt than just plain horny. It read very well too.
I enjoyed this story very much.
Exquisitely romantic... with a healthy dose of tragedy
I think my heart just might break in half if the story continues like this. Bravo! :)
Sigh ...wonderful.
I just love love love chapters like this.Great writing
so good!
why isnt this on my bookshelf?
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