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Up in the Air

byAdrian Leverkuhn©
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by Anonymous04/12/08

wonderful story

I really enjoyed your story. I am 61 years old and wonder sometimes if my wife died if I could ever find love again. Thanks for letting me hope that I could.

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by Anonymous04/12/08

Outstanding!

That takeoff had my asshole puckering too! Great story of lost and found love!

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by Anonymous04/12/08

Another great

story from one of the best authors on this site.The description of Canterbury Cathedral was breathtaking.

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by Anonymous04/12/08

Its Good Yo Be Back and Find YOU!

Been away awhile and have misses your well written stuff. I hope there is a sequal somewhere too!

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by farechilde04/13/08

A suprise

Now that's a way to start a story!

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by Anonymous04/13/08

"air apparent"

Loved the story - even if it was not an intended pun, "air apparent" made me actually laugh out loud!

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by Anonymous04/13/08

A Recommended Read - Multiple KUDO's Author

Your word pictures and flow were more than appreciated.

Now you force me to read more of your work - some penalty eh.

Author - You are appreciated and now looked forward to !!!

With Very High Regard

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by Anonymous04/13/08

SUPERB!!

I am so glad to see another of your stories--this is absolutely lovely! You have such a gift of giving one the feeling they are there as part of the story.
WELL DONE!!
Thanks,
Sam

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by Anonymous04/14/08

outstanding beginning

adrian,
please continue with this romance, as i believe you have a winner with this story. i definitely think there is a chapter 2. i had a hard time stopping, because i wanted them to finally find each other. he needed to get on with his life. i believe he found the next love of his life.
frank

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by Daniellekitten04/14/08

A beautiful story

it catches at your heart and keeps you reading until the end. Wonderful.

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by KingCuddle01/19/17

Another home run!

My second of yours. You are a SERIOUSLY fine writer!

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