I really enjoyed your story. I am 61 years old and wonder sometimes if my wife died if I could ever find love again. Thanks for letting me hope that I could.
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Anonymous04/12/08
Outstanding!
That takeoff had my asshole puckering too! Great story of lost and found love!
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Anonymous04/12/08
Another great
story from one of the best authors on this site.The description of Canterbury Cathedral was breathtaking.
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Anonymous04/12/08
Its Good Yo Be Back and Find YOU!
Been away awhile and have misses your well written stuff. I hope there is a sequal somewhere too!
Loved the story - even if it was not an intended pun, "air apparent" made me actually laugh out loud!
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Anonymous04/13/08
A Recommended Read - Multiple KUDO's Author
Your word pictures and flow were more than appreciated.
Now you force me to read more of your work - some penalty eh.
Author - You are appreciated and now looked forward to !!!
With Very High Regard
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Anonymous04/13/08
SUPERB!!
I am so glad to see another of your stories--this is absolutely lovely! You have such a gift of giving one the feeling they are there as part of the story.
WELL DONE!!
Thanks,
Sam
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Anonymous04/14/08
outstanding beginning
adrian,
please continue with this romance, as i believe you have a winner with this story. i definitely think there is a chapter 2. i had a hard time stopping, because i wanted them to finally find each other. he needed to get on with his life. i believe he found the next love of his life.
frank
English
wonderful story
I really enjoyed your story. I am 61 years old and wonder sometimes if my wife died if I could ever find love again. Thanks for letting me hope that I could.
Outstanding!
That takeoff had my asshole puckering too! Great story of lost and found love!
Another great
story from one of the best authors on this site.The description of Canterbury Cathedral was breathtaking.
Its Good Yo Be Back and Find YOU!
Been away awhile and have misses your well written stuff. I hope there is a sequal somewhere too!
A suprise
Now that's a way to start a story!
"air apparent"
Loved the story - even if it was not an intended pun, "air apparent" made me actually laugh out loud!
A Recommended Read - Multiple KUDO's Author
Your word pictures and flow were more than appreciated.
Now you force me to read more of your work - some penalty eh.
Author - You are appreciated and now looked forward to !!!
With Very High Regard
SUPERB!!
I am so glad to see another of your stories--this is absolutely lovely! You have such a gift of giving one the feeling they are there as part of the story.
WELL DONE!!
Thanks,
Sam
outstanding beginning
adrian,
please continue with this romance, as i believe you have a winner with this story. i definitely think there is a chapter 2. i had a hard time stopping, because i wanted them to finally find each other. he needed to get on with his life. i believe he found the next love of his life.
frank
A beautiful story
it catches at your heart and keeps you reading until the end. Wonderful.
Another home run!
My second of yours. You are a SERIOUSLY fine writer!
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