All Comments on 'Yours to Hold, Fuck, and Fill'

There should be more watersports stories on the boards!

You flawlessly echo my own conception of the bondage and discipline mentality. Truly possessing someone, marking your territory and then animalistically taking them... filthy, primal and raw.

Whoever gets you is a lucky man. Write more :)

Songbird, I like your style, the way you capture the moment. Now get on your knees and write some more...We're waiting!

Your story was like reading the two of us, going from thoughts to actions.so pure, so raw, so intimant, so up close and personal!!!!!..Linda n I so enjoy our mind and physical play..we loved your thoughts, we love the same play!!!..while we don't engage every time we are together..however, when it becomes a part of our total togethernss..we just know...we go there, we enjoy, we mate like a hot animal in heat...we love it, we love your story...life is good if you just go there and enjoy!!!..keep up the good work..you may contact us if you so care to!!..<rjforyu@yahoo.com>..have a beautiful "Wet" day!!...with respect...we are Linda n RJ

A solid 5 Star perfomance. I note it was written in 2008, and so implore you to resume writing the smut you are so capable of producing. I'm a writer myself and recognize greatness when I see it, and you possess it in abundance.

The perspective from which you tell the story is not all that unusual, but the manner in which you tell it is unique, probably unmatchable in erotica.

Please start writing again. the_panda@hotmail.com

Paris

Great story. love the dominance and all the hot piss action. good to see a fellow pee story writer plying his craft. well done.

Giving perusals to porn story is not arduous at all, but we should be quite assiduous and conscientious in a zany way while reading them.

I think we should be quite adamant in our nonchalance when it comes to fetish. Especially with lithe, lissome and supple girls.