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top notch art... need more like in illustrated.
Good story
Great story can be a little gross at some points such as the ring of blood
Boring
It was boring as hell, and pretty annoying. You tried, but you missed the target by a few inches. I got bored and eventually stopped reading. I like stories that have some sort of plot, not just people getting drunk and having sex.
Boring?
A few years later, and I still love the story. But I can see how some would feel it doesn't stand well on it's own. I'll keep working on it.
As far as the graphics go, I've taken my art to a whole new level. It's just too time consuming to both write and render. In a perfect world, I'd put all my stories in a graphic novel, each being it's own chapter.
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