All Comments on 'It Pays To Fly Economy Class Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
not bad

I never got that treatment flying BA from London to Calgary.......lol

LordmikelLordmikelabout 16 years ago
Good start but

A good beginning, I think you're doing yourself a disservice by calling it interracial, I'd have gone with group sex.

Miles though, if you really want to go that route (Not a turn on for me) make sure it is its own part and label it gay otherwise you're voting will be skewed for people reading it and feeling like they were "tricked" into reading something they never would have.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
i agree

with the previous poster. Based on the direction the story is going to, this should be in group sex. And if he goes with Miles, should be in gay male. Interesting start, carry on!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Basically,

I don't care who says what to whom, "Gentlemen, start your engines..."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great start!

I think the author chose interracial because the characters are from various racial backgrounds. Also, if you search the story tags, other things are listed (bisexual, etc.)

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