All Comments on 'The Slave Ch. 02'

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bad_girl69 about 16 years ago

:) Great

I have no idea what that other person is talking about.... but i think you did a great job, and continued with this chapter perfectly. I do hope you can continue as soon as possible. I cant wait till i read the next chapter.

Anonymousabout 16 years ago

I Love It Too!!

Thanks for continuing!! I am really enjoying it, and I hope in the future she will get some quality time with the Brit guy!! Can't wait for more!

nastystoryguy about 16 years ago

Don't think, just keep writing :)

It is shaping up as a really good story! Don't keep us waiting or we may have to spank you!

perl10 about 16 years ago

My vote...

...is for the guard/tormentor to 'rape' her when she's caught trying to escape!

Dryhill almost 13 years ago

GOOD

Still continues to be a good story.

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

Belongs in Non-Consensual

She's kidnapped, just like Jaycee Dugard - my interest ends here.

There are several grammatical errors in the first two chapters.

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