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The Slave Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by bad_girl6904/15/08

:) Great

I have no idea what that other person is talking about.... but i think you did a great job, and continued with this chapter perfectly. I do hope you can continue as soon as possible. I cant wait till i read the next chapter.

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by Anonymous04/15/08

I Love It Too!!

Thanks for continuing!! I am really enjoying it, and I hope in the future she will get some quality time with the Brit guy!! Can't wait for more!

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by nastystoryguy04/16/08

Don't think, just keep writing :)

It is shaping up as a really good story! Don't keep us waiting or we may have to spank you!

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by perl1004/16/08

My vote...

...is for the guard/tormentor to 'rape' her when she's caught trying to escape!

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by Dryhill05/09/11

GOOD

Still continues to be a good story.

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by SoCalCynic07/18/11

Belongs in Non-Consensual

She's kidnapped, just like Jaycee Dugard - my interest ends here.

There are several grammatical errors in the first two chapters.

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