It does make you wonder whether people read stories at all, or simply hit the 5 stars or 1 star based on the writer's name, not caring a bit about the story's quality or even if the story exists. Some of these feedback seem to have a robotic ring to them. As someone who has a story in the contest, as a personal policy of mine I didn't vote on your submission or anyone else's, but did get a chuckle out of this and wanted to let you know I share many of your emotions.
much toing and froing and trouble throughout the land,and a "darkness" descended until the Archangel[not really]Freddie said "lighten up" and it was so and you could see for bloody miles.The moon[in disgrace]dissappeared behind the sun,and all the people of the Earth threw off there garments and had a great celebration for they were tired of all the misery they had suffered????
Which must be garbage man in light of the collection of shit stories you have posted, dumb ass.
Was from a coon,probably the nearest thing to being a chimp[sorry chimps to insult you ]but not quite intelligent enough to be one.
Scouries reread Freddies story and commented that it was good. And it was so…And Freddie said 'There are more stories to write'....yes Freddie there are! And we can't wait. Keep up the good work! jim and gabby in miami
that Scurvies and BFD are sucking each other's little dicks.
To me, anyway. This story was definitely inspired by the Holy Ghost. Proverbs 22, verse 1, "A good name (like BOSTONFICTIONWRITER) is rather to be chosen than great riches, and loving favour rather than silver and gold." To you heathen bashers this means that a reputation has more value than possessions or wealth. A name (like BOSTONFICTIONWRITER) cannot be easily replaced, not even with lots of money and a bunch of alts. And remember you heathen harlots, the only lube in hell is BenGay. I'm just getting warmed up. I love some good Bible discussion.
BFW and Scouries not only can write super srories,but they also have HUGEEEE dicks,Nefertiti.So last poster you are so wrong.I have given up my son TUT[for the time being].Cleopatra tells me that crocs have two cocks,but I think she is talking out of her "asp".Happy earth day .We are going to build yet another Pyramid,because we keep lining up with the darkside of the moon.We also thinks he loves his "mummy"
"BFW and Scouries not only can write super srories,but they also have HUGEEEE dicks." I knew that. And hence the expression, "Tame as a three-legged dog." But you can teach them new tricks.
Came into the land and went about his business doing ill to many.The Lord saw this and was not pleased,To he that has shall be given ,and to he that has not shall be forever taken away said the lord.The evil soothsayer took much delight at annoying the Lord,but being a foolish man he knew not the strength of the almighty,like a sheep in the Darkside of the night the soothsayer was castrated.Funnily enough he took great delight in this and changed his name to BRIANE,girding his loins with panties bra and a frock he ran off at great speed into the desert.A mad nubian escaped slave called SAMX saw the cloud of great turmoil as Briane,with much haste searched for mannah[to keep himself going cus cus would have been better]Who is that without,said SAMX.me said Briane and knelt to drink of the waters,dispaying all his wordly charms to the nubian.Lust [one of the seven sins told to the elders]overcame SAMX and he went in unto BRIANE.And it came to pass that SAMX said to Briane"why are you not with child?".Briane was much enraged by this and spake "because I am an arsehole bandit like you here take this and SAMX was branded by the demons of hell with the number 666 on his arse.Brethren [and bits of crumpet]here endeth the first lesson.JAMES THE CGAF.
This, like your series was a poorly written mish-mash. You didn't review your series, you merely pimped it.
Verily I say unto thee, mind not the infantiles as they know not what they bash. (but - something about the image of "flushing" and landing on paper....) Keep it up Freddie, and don't let the bastards get you down.
I quess all of the orange fingers out there can't really type a story as clever as fictionwriter so they have to lick there wounds and there fingers. Shutup and be men and women enough to admit that he is a writer in his own right and you guys, well you guys are just losers! Go fictionwriter!
Well, after reading many of the entries in the Earth Day contest, Bostonfictionwriter's stories are the most creative and entertaining. He's got my vote.
The poor little "man" has no talent, no imagination, and nothing else on which to base a story.
as usual you do it again hon, its no wonder i find you amusing to read, and a brilliant teacher, now if you would just send me my half of the prize money we agreed on...ROFLMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!
seriously hon, you did it again and i applaud you big time.
Detractors begone, let the king of literotica through and be sure to kiss his ass and feet as you do. sorry i got to sign this anonymous freddie, but if you check you email you will find me smiling
RACIST AND STUPID....
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