I would say, I don't cheta on my wife and you shouldn't cheat on your husbands either. G.Belgium
Next time have some read it for spelling errors that spell check cannot catch like saw instead of was. there were several.
Nice effort, but stories written in the first and second person ("I" and "you") are quite difficult to write well, and perhaps even harder to read. Proof reading would certainly help. Your style needs work.
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