All Comments on 'The List Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Niiiice...

Please keep it coming (cumming?). You're doing a good job, but be sure to proofread for continuity.

mdb913mdb913almost 16 years ago
Don't you dare fucking stop now.

There'd better be a whole helluva lot more where this came from.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
a stud make be,but also selfish

mindy been your friend and you treat her like shit.still a nerd or a asshole.good writing writer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Don't leave us hanging!

This is an awesome story! The nerd is an asshole but that's part of the charm of the whole thing.

I would love to see the series develop and the introduction of new characters. I Don't know how many chapters you are planning but I will be reading every one...Great work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Fair is fair....

U may want 2 'spread it around' & that's your right but U.O.Mindy so I think u'd better re-think your plans 4 her!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Fair is fair....

U may want 2 'spread it around' & that's your right but U.O.Mindy so I think u'd better re-think your plans 4 her!

dankind41dankind41about 9 years ago
Sweet Revenge

I really admire your style of writing this like it's getting his revenge on the entire system. Everyone can relate to being a laughing stock at school. I am cheering for his character and can't wait to read more. Chapters 1 & 2 are great too. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
sounds just like ...

walter mitty with a foot long cock.

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