All Comments on 'Lust: First Time'

by Azure_Wanderer

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
rape

Her body may have reacted, but it wasn't consensual sex and thus rape. If she doen't go to the police now, the sisters should gang up on him, film it and expose him as a rapist.

Not to mention what revenge her boyfried could take or his own girlfriend.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Rapists are one of the scums of this earth

That says it all

ttvttpttvttpabout 16 years ago
Good Job

Its a fantasy people. But I would have liked him to be nicer. I hope the next person he rapes will really enjoy it. Keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Tacky...

...w/blackail as insurance? I know I WOULDN'T BELIEVE you & I'm a guy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Tacky...

...w/blackmail as insurance? I know I WOULDN'T BELIEVE you & I'm a guy!

ellyneiellyneialmost 16 years ago
Now now

Don't complain about rape-stories as long as they are in non-con-section people. Some of us like to read em. (As long as we know they are fiction). I liked it.

Silvermane001Silvermane001over 15 years ago
I liked it was my vote but I have to say...

writer put predators intent or goal in mind he got three girls to go after if this is fiction there chance there aren't people living by this example I hope not so. But keep that in mind people when your reading between the lines. How come the other broad didn't go? I just wondering for author. she didn't get curious...and followed them why did they take too long. Kind odd there. He not trying to make cult is he? What sort student is jacky? You didn't put him as thug or some sort protector guy...I still not clear what he is...is he Jock sort guy. Sounds like highschool or something or this college sounds more like story was in college.

Try make more fictional if you will make a setting where it is. otherwise people will think its real account and they call you all sorts of names. I still have issues in same sort thing. keep on working on that.

SexxxyCuriositySexxxyCuriosityover 15 years ago
Get him!

All I could think once I finished reading this was that I should write a story in response to this one where Sheryne's cousins or female rugby players or somebody does something equally as terrible to him. In fact, I think I will...

SexxxyCuriosity

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Hi-yah!

Awww, he was just a prick! Not some ill-treated geek under the constraints of puberty and akwardness.. Anyway, I love her innocence. "You ejaculated in me?" Instead of, "What the fuck you came in me?" Cute.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Christ, what an asshole.

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