Erica,I knew you would make it,with your background you could hardly fail.
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Anonymous04/18/08
Stop the spanish shit!
Good plot and all but the intermingled spanish in there really took away from the story. Either write it al in spanish for the mexicanos or write in english for all to enjoy.
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Anonymous04/20/08
Loved it again
Beautiful work as always honey. Please don't ever stop or listen to the rude people on the site. You are very sexy talented writer.
I'm from So Cal also and find it very sexy hearing the mix of latina dirty talk in your stories. Keep it up! Only complaint is that you need to review and edit out the spelling and grammar mistakes, or use an editor, please! It will make your stories even more enjoyable to read. *Kisses"
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Anonymous03/05/12
loved it!
I disagree with the reviewer who said to write your stories all in one language. Picturing a sexy latina/o huskily moaning in spanish is so freaking hot.
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Anonymous10/27/12
ANOTHER HOT HOT STORIE FROM ERICA...YOU GO GIRL...YOU GET ME HARD...AND KEEP ME HARD...
Dear Erica...Another of your HOT fucking stories...Keep them cuming...I love your writing...But check your spelling, maybe get a Franklin Spelling Ace there faster than a conventional dictionary...I believe it was Make Twane who once said something along the line of "I could never trust or admire anyone with so little imagination as to only spell a word one way"...But it does make for better understanding ...
English
Very good story
Another good story. keep on writng the stories are so hot
Well Done
Erica,I knew you would make it,with your background you could hardly fail.
Stop the spanish shit!
Good plot and all but the intermingled spanish in there really took away from the story. Either write it al in spanish for the mexicanos or write in english for all to enjoy.
Loved it again
Beautiful work as always honey. Please don't ever stop or listen to the rude people on the site. You are very sexy talented writer.
xxoo,
Cheryl
One More Chapter
I liked the mixture of spanish and english in the first two chapters. whomever said write it in one language.....SCREW THAT! Keep writing.
Loved it
Wow, fantastic storyline, loved it to completion. Keep me up with the great work. Thanks
Muy bueno
I'm from So Cal also and find it very sexy hearing the mix of latina dirty talk in your stories. Keep it up! Only complaint is that you need to review and edit out the spelling and grammar mistakes, or use an editor, please! It will make your stories even more enjoyable to read. *Kisses"
loved it!
I disagree with the reviewer who said to write your stories all in one language. Picturing a sexy latina/o huskily moaning in spanish is so freaking hot.
ANOTHER HOT HOT STORIE FROM ERICA...YOU GO GIRL...YOU GET ME HARD...AND KEEP ME HARD...
Dear Erica...Another of your HOT fucking stories...Keep them cuming...I love your writing...But check your spelling, maybe get a Franklin Spelling Ace there faster than a conventional dictionary...I believe it was Make Twane who once said something along the line of "I could never trust or admire anyone with so little imagination as to only spell a word one way"...But it does make for better understanding ...
Whuh...
.. it even got hotter !
You must continue that father/daughter adventuring !
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