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Are there sick minds here who find this tale -----
erotic? If so you sre worse than the sick mind who wrote it
A cliché beginning to end
I don't think you missed a single one - the raped virgin who is multiorgasmic - the about to be raped virgin who gets uncontrolably excited at the prospect of sex - the inevitable holy trinity of fellatio, cunnilingus and intercourse - multiple acts of intercourse, including anal
And no plot worthy of the name - the entire course of the "story" was predictable from the beginning
A cliché beginning to end
I don't think you missed a single cliche - the raped virgin who is multiorgasmic - the about to be raped virgin who gets uncontrolably excited at the prospect of sex - the inevitable holy trinity of fellatio, cunnilingus and intercourse - multiple acts of intercourse, including anal And no plot worthy of the name - the entire course of the "story" was predictable from the beginning
Again....it's NONCONSENT
don't read what you don't like. you're only being derogatory, non-constructive & an ignorant ass.
And You're Being Illiterate
I love it when functionally illiterates are the only ones who like a story. That tells you exactly how well the text is written, that it can only attract a certain uneducated minority. LOL
good
and would have liked a little more including the ass rape part
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