All Comments on 'Stranger on the Beach'

It started off very strong, pulled me right in and had me anticipating. However, after she got to his room, the rest of the story seemed very rushed and not nearly as well thought out as the beginning. I was expecting a lot more and have rated accordingly.

with poster below. It started out well then was kind of rushed toward the end.

yeah it was rushed but the concept is a AWESOME one!! And I like where its going.