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Started strong but fizzled out.
I must say I was rather impressed after reading the first few paragraphs. The story sounded as though it was written by a thoughtful and intelligent person with its manner and style, but that soon faded.
The banter between the main character and her "older lady friend" was good, and insightful, but it soon became clear that it had nothing to do with the story at hand. (Meaning it did not "match" or work with the "main" scene of the friend's dad.) Same with the younger guy/fuck buddy haircut thing. Maybe if you had longer transitions within the story to allow it to flow better?
Over all, the story read like a 14 year old boy wrote it. And/or, at least, someone that deep down does not like, and is not attracted to, older men ironically.
Sorry.
I like true stories.
And I appreciate your sharing the experience with Lit readers. The story was sexual, but not really erotic, because you didn't seem to be enjoying what you were doing. If I'm wrong about that, I'd love to know.
I love having my cock pampered`
great story
I love Having my cock pampered.
especially by a young woman, they love being naughty, and sluty sucking the cum out.
getting a blowjob from a young woman is more of a turn on for her than me, not withstanding. cum swallowing on the other hand, depends on the guy. if she thinks he expects it, she'll swallow. woman feel good swallowing, they love it
just like guys, guys love a girl cumming in there mouths.
I just wish there where more girl like you around, cocks love cumming in young girls mouths. keep up the good work.
p s wish you where my daughters friend.
nyc/guy
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