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A Life Missed

byFunwithRyleigh©
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by sassynyc04/15/08

vivid

i like the way you convey emotion. it comes across as palpable. i like the expressiveness of this poem.

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by TheJestersAdvocate05/09/08

Beautiful....

yet heartwrenching at the same time. Don't take me the wrong way, that's good, at least in my book. Definitely makes one feel if they get the meaning behind the poem. *hugs*

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by Anonymous06/18/08

very nice

nice J

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by Anonymous07/22/08

Good Poetry, Sad Theme

Honest emotions, well stated but a sad theme.

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by Anonymous11/23/09

so much

expressed,in such a short poem.
i feel that there are
reasons for the turns our
life takes...

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