All Comments on 'Shelter in the Storm Ch. 08'

Not quite my style, but then again.......... Der Schmetterling lächelt an mir.

CRAP CRAP CRAP CRAP.? its like its been wrote by a 7 year old child....RUBBISH

You've certainly made it quite clear how much you don't like this story- yet you continued to keep reading it! And I've seen your opinions all over Lit. You don't hold back, do you? Makes me think you're a literary genius! I might have to go and have a look at your submissions and be as cutting with my remarks as you are with yours!

Oh, wait- I've already checked out your submissions page, and their aren't any. Huh. Go figure!

YOUR MIXING THE NAMES UP YOU THICK FUCK

If you're going to be rude and call someone a "thick fuck" then at least know the difference between your and you're.

by the lack of comments i can see peoples point of view these stories are fucking rubbish