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by KOLKORE04/17/08

It's plastics!

Here is where you excel, with another quatrain, reminiscent of “Finicky”, with similar tone. It is subdued and dry but edgy just under the surface. Speaking of surfaces, I love the plastic image. On a second thought it could go both ways, connotation wise.

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by LeBroz04/17/08

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Sounds like that phase where love is taken for granted.

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