All Comments on 'Enjoying Rachel'

by woodacre

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foxy23foxy23almost 16 years ago
Nice description

Nice story which wasn't rushed so you got a good build up to the 'action'. I look forward to seeing how you get John to explain to Rach why they are in bed and why her pussy and breasts are so sore. Anyway she will sure be looking at him differently, even if she belives his version of events

here's to the next chapter.

Leanne

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Sorry I Gotta go along with the detractors

Lusting after a long time friends OK; Drunk then Date-Rape drugs by friend or foe is rape and should be a police action. Please, No oh I loved the sex so much that the rape was OK. Staying in bed to get her again as she wakes up and declares passionate love would be just a poor standarized plot device.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Enjoying it all...

while someone commented this scenario is rape, rape is a hot fantasy, but strictly a fantasy. I think Rachael being awake will be even better times for both. Describe those times, be descriptive of what you do to her, and how you allow her to do you. Oh, to be Rachael the next day!

Thank you for the hot read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
In reply to "Pretty sad ..."

Though this story didn't appeal to me, I have to say, in defense of the author, he did categorize it as NonConsent/Reluctance. I don't care for these type of rape stories myself but in all fairness to the writer, it was not horribly written. The circumstances and actions of the main character were disgusting indeed but, again, in defense of the author, this is a rape fantasy and s/he marked it accordingly.

woodacrewoodacrealmost 16 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

i would like ot thank all people for their feedback, and would welsome comments on my story. i do intend to do another story on rachel starting indeed when she wakes up next to him. would love some suggestions as to how he gets away with this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
A great sleepysex thing

It is a shame there aren't more unconscious sex stories. This one was especially good. The way you constantly remind us how she is unconscious.

By the way, could the next sleepy story you write involve a head KO?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Blah

Bad writing. I enjoy a good unconscious rape fantasy, but this wasn't sexy. Where's the tension? Suspense? Description of how each agonizing moment plays out? How it feels?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I wish this would happen to me 😍

Pretty good, i would have enjoyed it more if longer with more detail lol. Love sleep assault/non consent and being pleasured against my will

Sincerely,

Waiting to be molested in my sleep xo

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