I really enjoyed the first 3 parts of this story but was disappointed that a third character was introduced. It weakened what had seemed a very close and loving relationship between the original brother and sister.
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I really enjoyed the first 3 parts of this story but was disappointed that a third character was introduced. It weakened what had seemed a very close and loving relationship between the original brother and sister.
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