All Comments on 'Big Booty Ghetto Bitches Ch. 03'

Crappy as are most

I got it,your the big booty ghetto bitch. I know your big in the ass and your ghetto for sure. Any way sugar you still can't write. Your story is stupid but your a little slow yourself so thats it. As long as litertica lets you, you will keep sending this in no matter if no one likes or reads it. Don't get hurt out there sugar.

The only black arses I like are on black women who I adore,I would never dream of insulting any women by trying to fuck her arse.

It's so easy to get some of the readers here nuts. Keep writing these witless critical comments folks, since it obvious deters the man from submitting stories, right? Did you ever consider that he's laughing his ass off picturing you guys getting all lathered up every time you see his or BFW's name on a story? Pavlov had nothing on SamX or Freddie.

What kind of life is that to write shit no one likes, just to get bad feedback. Has to be more to life than just being a bad writer and pissing people off.

U really suck man my lesbian girl friend is black and she is so pissed right now she said all ur stories are totall bull crap and I agree with her 'cause i;m black and a gurl and U SUCK!!! stop trying 2 write 'cause u can't even lesbians like ME HATE YOU!!!

This reads like a man that's a bookworm wrote it. Odd how their was a lack of focus on the dialogue and context of it all while harping on the actions taking place. Not the reactions, second guesses, surprises and how that emotional journey contributed to the experience. A word of advice, even one night stands have emotional investment and that context adds so much to the reader's experience. We're already online, we can get porn anywhere. Your job is to lay the infrastructure to a slow burn that erupts like Hiroshima. You have good foundational ideas. Ensure you take the scenic route when executing