All Comments on 'By the Way'

and you captured it perfectly, back in the old days husband had to wait to hear all the awful day his wife had and she had to wait to hear all his good and bad news, isn't technology wonderful.

A step backward. Difficult enough capturing one narrative voice, let alone two. Last series (But I Won't Do That) much better. In fact, best of all submissions by this author. "But I Won't Do That" is more nuanced, with a strong, well-defined central character, and is actually believable. When you throw in the age-old struggle between the sacred vs. the profane, it makes "But I Won't Do That" one of the better series on the site. And I have read a lot of them, trust me!

I liked the banter between loving husband and wife, with kids thrown in the mix. If more families were like this there would be less cheating and divorce in the world.