His Fiancee with Another Guy

Find a Real Man

Hopefully she walks away from perv and buddies now. Find someone that really loves her, not just a sex pervert like she has now.

who give a shit

bend over and let the next guy fuck him too.

Hated the story Line

Hated your story line, better luck next time

Exactly what relationship with her would not be

the same? Loving her. Being the only one she has sex with? Taking drugs? Being a wimp cuckold? Getting her pregnant by another man? Being totally stupid? Having her walk off and find a real man to love her? Finally getting a mental age of over 13? This story has no real plot. Drugged, girl fucked by another, new beginnings, this is it? It isnt dramatic, it isnt erotic, and damn sure isnt interesting!

Baby--making....

We need more chapters to this one. Imagine...the babysitter got fucked by the "baby" but to go on and have his baby, too? Very erotic!

Another pervert story

This site seems to be totally dominated by perverts lately.The stories are not erotic or interesting, just disgusting.
the Ct. Yankee

Ridiculous

I think you have this story in the wrong category. It shouldn't be "Loving Wives" but more like "NonConsent/Reluctance". "Loving Wives" involves women purposely cheating on their spouses. Mike talked Billy into touching Jen even after she clearly said NO. Even though she eventually got aroused, IT WAS STILL RAPE. And why does Mike call Jen a slut when HE was the one that created the situation? Coz he's a fucking moron that's why. I hate it when authors pull that shit. "Man forces woman to fuck another guy, man calls woman whore" wow, now that's a guy worth keeping... not.

cuckish disturbed writer loves self humiliation

Your predeliction for male disgust is showing cuck. Sadly sorry for those around you. Seek help to get back your lost self respect.

Then re-examine the difference between arousal and the sick shit you are addicted to. No reasonable person wants to hit themself in the head with a hammer - repeatedly - as you have here.

Seek help to regain the lost self respect you should have.

Male humiliation

I don't get it. Why do so many would be writers hate men? To be honest though there aren't many real men in these stories, only insecure little boys with no self respect because NO man would ever tolerate this behavior.

I agree with most other comments.

The writing was fair, but that's all I'll concede. This was obviously rape. If a man loves a woman and is engaged to marry her, how on earth could he drug her and essentially coerce her to screw another guy, especially after she says no several times? If that's his fantasy, and possibly it could be the author's fantasy, then I suggest therapy and right now. Maybe the story could make it in the "non-consent/reluctance" category but it certainly does not fit "loving wives."

Missed his chance

Great story but Mike missed his chance. I bet Jen would have loved Mike cleaning up after Billy and Mike could have enjoyed a tasty fresh double creampie. I certainly would have had I been in his place. Yum!!

Loved it

My fiance and I loved this fantasy. More please!

Rape is rape.

How many times did she say "No"? I'd love to send both boys to prison for rape! The drugs and wine are NOT an excuse. This is a rape story. It also wasn't very well written. The author could do better, use an editor and tell us a story worth reading. This isn't it.

BS

The bulk of writers are correct in their evaluation of this tripe. I am sorry for a woman caught up in such a perverse situation. She obviously has poor taste in men.

Excellent

Very hot premise, and nicely written too!

Can you believe this shit?

This guy's wife likes getting fucked in the ass in strangers' hotel rooms:

cuckish disturbed writer loves self humiliation

04/23/08 by Anonymous in USA

Your predeliction for male disgust is showing cuck. Sadly sorry for those around you. Seek help to get back your lost self respect.

Then re-examine the difference between arousal and the sick shit you are addicted to. No reasonable person wants to hit themself in the head with a hammer - repeatedly - as you have here.

Seek help to regain the lost self respect you should have.

Losers...

You're all on a fucking erotic story site, not the Fox News forums.Stop whining and grow a pair.

loved it,just too short

Jen should have been made to have more humiliation at the hands of her soon to be husband.The guys should have stripped her naked, and one fuck her in the pussy and the other fuck her in the ass. Her struggle and protests becoming ever louder while the men pleasure her through orgasm after orgasm, making her feel cheap and slutty, by becoming so willing to orgasm. She could be told by her seducers that her body is for their pleasure,and that she is nothing but a warm hole for them to cum in, and she should except her role in life.The morning after, with the three of them in bed, Jen full of cum,pussy and asshole sore, and the taste of cum in her mouth, she would realize that she is indeed nothing but a slut to be used by her lovers...Rich

Not the same...

yes, i think so. Your marriage is not the same as it was. You will be only the second in everywhere.

Loser

If they do still get married. As I recall she tried to keep them from having her. Once she got Billy's size comfortable, there would begin to be some changes in her mind. At first hurt and anger at Mike, then arousal at the thought of Billy and then maybe making Mike think itis idea as they have more friends over and drink a little more booze and hit the pipe. Mike probably won't realize that Jen is dressing a little more sexy (possibly - slightly slutty). Well, if he does get married, he has lost that respect from her that relates to tust and infidelity and the sacred marriage vows, so...What an Idiot! Write another chapter.

WTF?

If you want to write a rape story, fucking add it to the Nonconsent section, so people can avoid your bullshit.

(Hint: No means no)

Rape...

Even tho Billy might have knocked her up, this story was really involving rape that has no place in Literotica. It is interesting tho that the rug rat she babysitted has now grown to make a rug rat with her.

For fuck sake it's a fantasy

Stop whining about rape, it's a fantasy so who cares. And whether or not it belongs under "loving wives" or non-consentual/reluctance is a matter of opinion, it's both catagories anyway. Oh, and she DID say 'fuck me!'

Aaanyhoe, nices story, could do with some more storyline though, unless you like short wank-stories... but a bit more story would be nice, build up tension n such :P

Liked the premise but...

... this story, which is very hot, would be so much more enjoyable if you did not use the same names of the main two characters in all of them -- small-dicked Mike and long-legged, b-cup titted, blonde Jen. That she was shared with the guy she babysat, Billy is a very erotic premise. However, by using different names and character descriptions (I prefer B, but how about an A or C cup just for a change? Just don't go overboard like so many writers and make her a DD! And the guy could be average-sized and not necessarily humiliated, etc.) your stories would work much better with the reader not forced to compare histories and finding inconsistencies in timelines.

Illegal drugs

So I stopped reading and rated it 1*.

Super story

Did she get knocked up like my sister in this situation?

You mean ex-fiance.

It's not rape if she loved it

I honestly don't get the comments from people who don't like the idea of their wife/girlfriend getting fucked by another, preferably bigger guy. If you don't like these stories, why read them? The title tells you the content after all.

I'll go further and say in real life it was a thrill to see my wife's eyes light up when a guy we'd found on the web shoved his whole horse cock deep into her. Like the character in the story she needed some convincing but it was pretty clear once she saw his redbull thick 10" cock that he was going to get to fuck her.

She even let him, like the character fuck her bareback and come deep in her. And, I, the cuckold, loved it.

@Big Bear (ursus)

Difference is your wife HELPED you search for a PythonDick!!!
In this SAD excuse for an LW story, Sweety is taken despite repeated denials, and pleadings, and protestations of PAIN. Agreeing after prolonged use of FORCE would never be accepted as conveying consent in a subsequent rape trial! (LIT allows it because otherwise they couldn't have a Non-Consent section!)
If Sweety has 3 neurons, Fiancé and Billy will be history as soon as she sobers up!

Where to go?

Sure as hell not to the altar. Cancel the wedding plans then find a new girlfriend. If it isn't obvious, you're a dummy.

where to go? away, far far away and quickly.

Stories about retarded people.

Are NOT erotic.

1*

Umm, this story sounds more like rape than sex

She spent about 3/4 of the story saying "no" and "stop". If they actually got married then she would spend the rest of her life (well, until they got divorced) giving into his whims and fucking random dudes. Honestly, if this is what you need to get aroused, why get married?

Hey mr 'Where To Go'

All you readers are all dummy, Jackass.

what is the point of getting married?

You have already let loose to fuck anyone other than you she wants.
There is NO marriage.

Need a follow chapter!

Excellent story - please continue to next chapter....... maybe she fucks billy on their wedding night.

hot

well written story, made my cock hard.