Well you and your "entourage" better go back because your people a starving to death as you enjoy ill deserved food you bastard,in fact all SAMX are bastards.Come on deny that.
How can you say such a thing ,the last poster got it right .
by
Anonymous04/23/08
Please.....
you really can not write. You just repeat the same themes over and over. Boring, redundant, sexist, and stupid. Get over yourself immature silly person.
by
Anonymous04/25/08
The worst part is
The worst part is that whenever I place "Black Women" in the 'Story Tags' I'm flooded with your stories. On top of that it seems that you claim to be of color but your portrayls of black women (even by misogynist terms) is horrid. The way that you write about a race you claim to be a part of sounds like you're writing from the outside in not the inside out.
1) If you claim to be such an 'Ass-man' then you should know that there are a large variety butts out there 'Big' and 'Ghetto' are vague discriptions to say the least.
2) Why are the main characters of your story always introducing themselves in the beginning of the story? Can't you work that in through conversation?
3) Back to the 'Outside the race writing' style; everyone knows that African-Americans come in all the hues that a human can have from albino white to obsidian black. And no 'Ghetto-Black' is not a color one can illuminate in one's mind's eye. If you were describing the color of the sky at sunset would you just say 'It was Blue with some other colors'?
4) Try writing about something else other than black men and women getting anally brutalized. Maybe you need to walk away from this for a while... try poetry or even hire an editor.
5) Even characters that you hate should get some respect from the author or else there isn't any way for your readers to connect with your creations. Sadist want to know how the 'hunt' went and masochist want to know how sweet the moment of surrender tasted. If you take my advice seriously we should see something worthwhile in five months.
by
Anonymous04/28/08
Explain how you
smuggle these "stories" out of prison.
by
Anonymous04/28/08
Buy a mirror....
.....and watch yourself jerk off. You are an asshole, and if your premise is based on your "blackness", whatever the fuck that is supposed to be, then you are an asshole using your ethnic background as an excuse for your terrible writing. Disgraceful.
English
IDIOT
That says it all.
Shit Brain
Welcome back
What A Twat
Well you and your "entourage" better go back because your people a starving to death as you enjoy ill deserved food you bastard,in fact all SAMX are bastards.Come on deny that.
You shit
How can you say such a thing ,the last poster got it right .
Please.....
you really can not write. You just repeat the same themes over and over. Boring, redundant, sexist, and stupid. Get over yourself immature silly person.
The worst part is
The worst part is that whenever I place "Black Women" in the 'Story Tags' I'm flooded with your stories. On top of that it seems that you claim to be of color but your portrayls of black women (even by misogynist terms) is horrid. The way that you write about a race you claim to be a part of sounds like you're writing from the outside in not the inside out.
1) If you claim to be such an 'Ass-man' then you should know that there are a large variety butts out there 'Big' and 'Ghetto' are vague discriptions to say the least.
2) Why are the main characters of your story always introducing themselves in the beginning of the story? Can't you work that in through conversation?
3) Back to the 'Outside the race writing' style; everyone knows that African-Americans come in all the hues that a human can have from albino white to obsidian black. And no 'Ghetto-Black' is not a color one can illuminate in one's mind's eye. If you were describing the color of the sky at sunset would you just say 'It was Blue with some other colors'?
4) Try writing about something else other than black men and women getting anally brutalized. Maybe you need to walk away from this for a while... try poetry or even hire an editor.
5) Even characters that you hate should get some respect from the author or else there isn't any way for your readers to connect with your creations. Sadist want to know how the 'hunt' went and masochist want to know how sweet the moment of surrender tasted. If you take my advice seriously we should see something worthwhile in five months.
Explain how you
smuggle these "stories" out of prison.
Buy a mirror....
.....and watch yourself jerk off. You are an asshole, and if your premise is based on your "blackness", whatever the fuck that is supposed to be, then you are an asshole using your ethnic background as an excuse for your terrible writing. Disgraceful.
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