was a bit short but maybe you could tell us how they got together - the next submission could be a prequel...pls pls continue!
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Anonymous04/23/08
Great story
I really enjoyed this story even though it was a little short. You have included an emotion other than blind lust which I appreciate very much.
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Anonymous04/24/08
Have to agree with other posters
Was just getting into it, then it was all over. A prequel would be nice: How did they meet? How did they hook up? You've created two interesting characters that we'd LOVE to read more about! Keep up the good work!
Wow it is good short story. Please expand on this couple because you have hit on your hands. That was one of best oral sewx scene I have read in long time.
English
Please continue
was a bit short but maybe you could tell us how they got together - the next submission could be a prequel...pls pls continue!
Great story
I really enjoyed this story even though it was a little short. You have included an emotion other than blind lust which I appreciate very much.
Have to agree with other posters
Was just getting into it, then it was all over. A prequel would be nice: How did they meet? How did they hook up? You've created two interesting characters that we'd LOVE to read more about! Keep up the good work!
ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE!
Was getting good!
Love IT!
You should write a new story
Angel
You should do More of Dominic and Angel.
Talk about their first time and How her Family took it when she Married a White Man?
Oral fixation
Wow it is good short story. Please expand on this couple because you have hit on your hands. That was one of best oral sewx scene I have read in long time.
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