All Comments on 'High and Low Ch. 01'

Like the way this started out. Lots of potential for great further chapters!

This definitely has it's moments!

I like the buildup.Real good character

descriptions.Can't wait to read more!

This is really subtle! I think Simon is really well drawn; I perfectly understand his fixation with Karen, and I totally identify with his thinking.

This is beautiful stuff, babe - when are we going to get ch. 02?

i must admit, this was a sexy read. (Which kind of surprised me. *blush*)

Keep up the great work hon!

Hi Hun, I think I actually like this one better than I Bisexual, the characters are very well drawn and I love the contrast of the shy and blushing Simon who wants to try everything but is too scared, and his muse the self-destructive Karen who's Out There and not coming back! This is very dark and suggestive stuff.

Just keep an eye on your spell/grammar checker, babe. I'm not going to mark u down for it tho, I enjoyed it too much.

xxx.Sadie