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Where's the sex?
Where's the sex? This story is in the wrong category. This is NON-EROTIC.
Sex!
I certainly saw some. Great story for ANZAC day.
God Almighty
When will you nuts "get" that the only category for anything related to gay male here is the Gay Male category? That's the only place a reader looking for a gay male read will go--and if a gay male piece is put anywhere else, it will receive the same asinine comments for being there as the one below is. So, just because you thought it was in the wrong category, you zapped it completely? Nice.
Personally...
I thought this story was beautifully erotic. Eroticism doesn't necessarily equal excruciating sexual detail. Great job as usual, you write very sensually.
Well Done
This was a beautiful and erotic story. The imagination takes over when a story is well written. The ending was just right and completely unexpected.
Well Done
I really liked this one. A tragic romance with an unexpected ending. The pace and beauty of it was perfect.
Good story
Loved it as I always love your tales. Maybe a chapter 2?
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