All Comments on 'Kelly Joins The Club Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Surprised

That all the women are not in the club with all this cum flying about.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
different stories....but exactly the same..

we were big fans of your first stories...but as you continued...different stories...but all really exactly the same..almost same dialogue/scenerio/and fetish...that becomes tiresome and boring...your premise is very hottt..but you need to take your very uninhibited families..to the sex charged level that you intend to..but never do...enough with the butt fetish..you never describe your characters bodies..just their butts..mom/dad never seems to be turned on to anything but their son's butts..what about their muscle...their legs..feet...and oral sex seems to be only what they engage in..withfew exceptions..you have a terrific opportunity to really create highly sex charged dialogue...but you never really reach that level...hope in future posts you do...

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