I love the way this story is progressing, keep up the good work!
Story is basically good but for your spelling errors which interrupt the flow of the story.
All I can ask is when will there be more? The characters are well fleshed out and the descriptive style of writing leaves the reader left wanting nothing more than to click on the next page. Very well done.
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Nice!
I love the way this story is progressing, keep up the good work!
You need to find an editor
Story is basically good but for your spelling errors which interrupt the flow of the story.
more?
All I can ask is when will there be more? The characters are well fleshed out and the descriptive style of writing leaves the reader left wanting nothing more than to click on the next page. Very well done.
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