Better than most of your worthless dribble,but still not good.
With things you do not understand,as the first poster says this is a slight improvement.
Story would have been better if you wrote what college Lucifer went to and what sports programs they offered.
almost missed it
You better be careful sambox or the devil may come visit you tonight while your laying in bed jacking off. sambo the albino, yikes.
A full moon again,you want to watch your arse Sambo you will end up getting it scorched by old Nick himself.
It's a great plot. It will be interesting to see where you'll take this story
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Better
Better than most of your worthless dribble,but still not good.
Dont Play
With things you do not understand,as the first poster says this is a slight improvement.
Two things missing.......
Story would have been better if you wrote what college Lucifer went to and what sports programs they offered.
Gee-Shit Brain returned and I
almost missed it
Gee-Shit Brain returned and I
almost missed it
Careful
You better be careful sambox or the devil may come visit you tonight while your laying in bed jacking off. sambo the albino, yikes.
Is It
A full moon again,you want to watch your arse Sambo you will end up getting it scorched by old Nick himself.
I really like where this is going,
It's a great plot. It will be interesting to see where you'll take this story
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
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More submissions by Samuelx.