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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/12/13

More

Please please please give us more!!

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by Anonymous08/05/13

O M G !!!

My stepmother's extra-marital, secret lover sent me this story out of the clear blue... and it's been on my mind late at night when I go to bed, early at dawn when I wake up... a marvelous hint at what's in store for me when I finally say "yes" to them... great story, the BEST I've read - ever!
Blanca

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by ticklishsoles10/06/13

Fantastic!

Man-o-man, I stroked the entire time I was reading this and somehow managed to hang on edging after edging.

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by Anonymous02/26/14

We Need More!

I read a lot of Literotica and this story ROCKED! You gave yourself the perfect story line for the sequel with Cindy and Victoria using blackmail to get Paul to use and abuse. Marie has also shown her exhibitionist side that can be played into the story as well. Extremely well written!

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by BrendaNW04/12/14

oh wow

so hot and sexy I can't believe it

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by horny4itnow05/19/14

three on one

wow what a turn on. very good story

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by Seeker110707/25/14

gave it a four

It was a great story. I only have one problem and that is that I abhor rape in any way shape and form. Yes I am a guy, I enjoy sex a lot. That said teenage hormones and all this was still a rape scene and don't think it was anything else. I was a victim of such an act of violation. Did I have the correct hormonal responses? Yes, with me I was taken advantage of by an older girl and her girlfriends. They were supposed to be my babysitters. Screwed me up for a long while.
I understand that yes this is a stroke story and a wild one at that but just how do you think he would feel when he could finally think straight? Forced to cheat on his girlfriend, and betrayed by that same girl. If anyone asks yes a man can be raped and not just by being penetrated.

Sorry folks but this is just my honest opinion. And for the record i was not yet 13 at the time with a seven+ inch equpment. Imagine that and no idea what anything was about. So enjoy the story, was well written but keep in mind what it really was.

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by Anonymous09/16/14

Gave it five

I so want to see another story from you guys it felt like i wanted to f**k someone well bye

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by Anonymous10/19/14

Re: Seeker1107

Feel u bra, same here.

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by rdapman12/12/14

Those girls were great!

I don't think Cindy and Victoria need to hide anything from Marie. Marie essentially gave Cindy permission, maybe even ordering her to: "Yeah... when I'm done with you, it's Cindy's turn! She will fuck your brains out!" Either Cindy or Victoria could innocently explain to Marie what she missed. Victoria: "Don't worry, Marie, Cindy took care of Paul just like you wanted. You're right, he was a monster! Paul tried to resist for a long time, but Cindy finally forced it out of him!" Marie, to Cindy: "What?! You fucked my boyfriend while I was passed out?" Cindy: "What? You said..." Victoria: "Yeah, Marie, we both heard you. You sounded pretty serious when you said Cindy would get Paul after you if he didn't come for you." Cindy: "Yeah, believe me, it wasn't easy riding him that long, but I had to do it for you!"

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by maddict01/07/15

wait a minute. ...the rest of you.

You guys have never riddin a quad before. I admit this one is awfully young but never to soon to find the groove........

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by Anonymous03/10/15

And then the unexpected

Because , of course, this is fiction. Paul woke Marie up and told her everything! All the evidence was there in front of her face. She went ballistic. Threw Paul out and he was glad to go because these women were bat shit crazy and he wanted nothing to do with any of them. Then she started in on the other girls and proceeded to ruin any relationships Cindy and Victoria had. She moved out and left them to pay the rent. All in all it was a complete cluster fuck in exchange for some meaningless sex. Boy was that stupid!

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by NWlifter05/20/15

Run from the crazy and do not look back!

Anon post on 03/08/15...
That's an ending I could get into.

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by Taljinn10/18/15

Yes, omfg yes!

Sounds like the beginning of a very interesting relationship.

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by Anonymous12/03/15

What about poor Victoria

Victoria should have took off her clothes and sat on Paul's face, then feed him some fresh girl cum.
He would have fucked her too.
Now, that would make it three on one!!!

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by Anonymous12/20/15

Excellent

Honestly, I am hoping you write another one about these 4...I mean, at a minimum I can see Cindy and Victoria plotting together how best to arrange round 2...

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by MartyMB01/16/16

Cindy and Victoria were evil

I could see Paul being pissed at Cindy, Victoria, and maybe even Marie. Cindy was evil, as was Victoria. They had nobody's interest but their own. Marie was okay. I think she in this for the fun of it...wanted to give Paul some fun. At least it was fun for him until he was tied up. I haven't figured out why she allowed that.

Paul was just plain taken advantage of. I could see him leaving the other three for a few weeks, coming back to Marie after that time, but never being around Cindy and Victoria (at least alone) again.

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by BigBlue929502/21/16

excellent

well done

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by Anonymous03/21/16

This idea of cheating irritates me

What's with all the bullshit of it not "cheating" as long as the guy won't cum? What the fuck? It's cheating the moment they started getting intimate without Marie's consent.

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by Ambivalence04/10/16

Hmmm... more likely it plays out this way...

(Though much shorter, when her friend makes the comment about tell me if you masturbate or I'll tell about how quick you came the first time with Marie...)

He looks at Marie not quite believing she shared THAT bit of information. And all the time Marie is berating Cindy, he continues to look at Marie.

When she eventually feels his stare and glances his way, the words die in her throat.
Anger she'd expected and figured she could deal with... A simple heartfelt apology she was sure would take care of that. Betrayal would be harder, but she'd hoped that if he were feeling that her rant at Cindy would counteract it.
But when she made eye contact and he had a questioning look, one that then swept up and down her, she knew. Suddenly, he felt he no longer knew who - or maybe even what - she was.

As he gathered his things and packed his backpack up, ignoring whatever they were saying to *him*, he told Marie he'd let the teacher know they were no longer working on the same project together.

Then he looked at Cindy like he finally recognized trash and turned and left.


What can I say...? I really have issues where people buckle to blackmail that has more to do with embarrassment than criminal drawbacks...

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by Anonymous04/19/16

Outstanding!

The best I've ever read!

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by ProfDavros06/13/16

Wicked fun

Fun and so good with many motivations in play. Can't wait for the next one!

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by Anonymous07/12/16

Woah

This was awesome but i feel so bad for paul i would be so uncomfortable

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by Grabenork07/29/16

YES!

Fan-fucking-tastic!

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by Anonymous09/29/16

Many re-reads

This has been a long time favorite of mine. I occasionally come back to read this one in particular, it's very detailed and hot. While I enjoy long stories with a ton of build up and explanation, this has that great in between of "looking for a quickie" and also "builds with a lot of hotness" -- wish there was a sequel.

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by Anonymous10/22/16

As soon as he gets free he gut punches Cindy, preferring to just deck her and knock her out but not really wanting to break her jaw or eye socket, but really the only sure way to take down the damned wrestling team ninja. While she's trying to breathe he pins her face down and ties her hands behind her back, then strips her naked from the waist down, pins her legs up and hog ties her. He managed to do the same to her friend without any violence, his girlfriend was easiest still being passed out. He arranged them in a star pattern, all of their heads facing each other, so they could clearly see each other and what was about to happen to each other. A glass of water on his girlfriend to wake her up, then making the rounds to gag all of them.
He hasnt said a word the entire time. He leaves the room for a few minutes and comes back with a bottle of coconut cooking oil from the kitchen and sets it in the middle of the room, then sitting down next to it he grabs his backpack and pulls out a medicine bottle, shaking two pills out into his hand, picks up a bottle of water and drinks down the pills. "...figured I better take two viagra for a start, wouldn't want to get worn out in the middle of fucking your virgin asses! That wouldn't do! I'm going to work real hard not to cum in your asses though because after I finish breaking you three in I'm gonna take a nap then see about blowing a load in each of you and knocking you three up! That seems reasonable, right? Whats that? Oh, you agree! i thought so!" "...or maybe I should just be content with your asses and let the hockey team worry about knocking you up? Nah, I wouldnt do that. Though the guys on the wrestling team really would like to play with you Cindy. Thats ok, right? "

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by maddict10/24/16

Man on deck, your no longer a boy!

You've done us proud Paul, allways show a lady a good time. The girls have discovered a ill kept secret (except in Lit Stories) the second cumming always takes longer so you can to.
Did I say that was Hot, Hot, Hot. My second read, do the girls take advantage of their horniness again

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by JJMemaw062310/29/16

I must say . . .

I agree with Anonymous (the escape of Paul & Cindy & the wrestling team)!! Cindy needs her cum-upance! I can understand Maria's wanting to do him, but he doesn't belong to the other two. Wasn't something I'd read again.

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by noname33311/29/16

Check it out!

Hi I don't know why it wasn't posted here, but the author of this wrote a good part of another one of these stories. Not a sequel, but a similar situation, only more epic and intense. Enjoy!
https://milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1 6218

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by Anonymous12/12/16

Two Girls Can Share A Man

It happens all the time. My three sisters and I passed boyfriends from one to another in high school. Cousins got involved in the trades as well. And we all had friends that benefitted from our castoffs, as well. And currently my cousin and I are wearing out the same guy...another castoff. I take care of his sexual needs during the day; and little cousin has him at nights. And we have a truckdriver friend that we doubleteam. So, yes I can see Cindy and Marie both with our hero, Paul; and even Victoria gets in on it. Paul is such a lucky man. And the three girls are equally lucky.

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by Anonymous02/09/17

Is it alright.....

If he comes back with eight friends .....?

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