Three on One

Quite amazing

There isn't enough stories that take this angle; very well done. I am very much hoping you continue on with the scheming and sexy plans Cindy has for our helpless hero!

Superb!

This is a very well written story. Not personally what I would call the "submissive" type, but this story had a nice angle to it.

Keep it up man.

Damn

I'm throbbing hard...and wishing for more....

Carry it on...

Hot story... '5' from me! I guess in the next part he's blackmailed to fuck Victoria who clearly wants to give him a test drive. Interesting twist on the typical rape fantasies found in this section and definitely a good read... well written, even if not completely plausible; I still lost myself in the story, read to the end and wanted more!

nice one ;)

Mmmmmm I could read that over n over hehe I cam 3 times reading that !!!! Nice work

WOWWW

i came sooooo much reading this. it was awesome!

oh wow

i came three times,
amazing.

Amazing

That was one of the most erotic stories I've ever read. I desperately hope you continue this story.

Fantastic

Brilliant

Possibly THE best story i have ever read. Well written and hot as hell. PLEASE continue it.

Oh yeah

Oh hell yes, I came over and over reading that. Great job, keep writing, this rocked. I'm getting hot just thinking about it.

Breathtaking!!

Ohhh my god, this is the hottest, most AMAZING, most unforgettable fantasy I've ever read! I can't get it out of my head! Two weeks later, and I keep coming back to read it again. My heart is pounding! Please write more! We want MORE! :)

Alpha females! hehe :)

Marie is a cutiepie! Victoria and Cindy are hot! Cindy is alpha female and wow was that sexy! I hope you write more female seducing men forcibly hehe

WOW

So much sex, I would have loved to trade places! I'd have filled them much sooner! Then Victoria next....Terrific turnaround on forced sex.

OMFG

HOT!! That was the effing hottest thing I've ever read on the internet! I want to practice making babys with you and all your characters! You need to write more more more!

constructive criticism

That was incredible! I liked that you introduced some sex appeal early and created suspense around who was going to fuck who. Some great descriptions of male pleasure and orgasm. If only the female side was treated with the same detail. I felt teased the Victoria was left out but I hope she plays a part in a sequel!

Disgusting

If I was Paul, I'd take that to a fucking tribunal. Horrific.

Absolutely amazing!

Extremely well written, a good read (not too long and not too short). I love how you've even written the grunts and groans down as proper dialogue. Flawless story.
I really hope you write more, so far you've written just one piece, I really do hope you write more.

Thanks.

I loved it!

Soooo very hott. Classic Fantasy but not cheesey. Perfectly done. Loved all the small details,...the hint of Maries soft ass behind her black panties under the lifted skirt.. I was rooting for Paul, triumphant victory to reverse rolls on Cindy, wanted so bad for him to enjoy her breasts. BRING Back a Chapter 2, love to find out how Cindy gets Victoria involved in blackmailing Paul.

I have read many stories on here and this one had me sucked in unlike any other. Fantastic job.

FUUUUUUUUCK

Dam this story is awwwwesome. Fuck I have to friends of my girlfriend who were perfect for fantasizing and this story helped CONSIDERABLY! FUCK I CUMMED HARDER THAN EVER BEFORE!!!

Unbelievably arousing

I've never been drawn in by anything on this site like this one story, here. I satisfied myself twice, during it. And I even completed the story, afterwards (which I never do). Very well done! The best literotica has to offer!

Great story

great story, why not carry it on?

WOW

Amazing story, well written, loved the description of all the details. Very very arousing. How come Victoria never got a turn with him? ;)

FUCK YES

Honestly, my favorite story on here so far. Great job. Loved it, cant wait to try this one myself ;)

OH MY!!!

that was so intense!! seriously made me cum endlessly. every time one of the characters came i did :) you should write more stories cuz your amazing!!!

Oh Hell Yes

Where can I get one of these toys? It would be gr8 to hold out that long again for my wife without any booze...

Is there going to be a part 2?

Let him have all 3 in one giant, amazing orgy

Holy SHIT that's hot!!

Wow, what a rush! There's no other story on Literotica quite like this one. Man, I wish my gf would talk that way! ...and tie me down like that! ...and let her friends to watch us fuck like that! ...and let her hot friend bang me like that! Holy shit, dude. Please tell me there's more!

I consider it grossly unfair...

...that this author hasn't written anything else.
But still, bravo, for one of the best stories on Literotica!

erotica at it's best

you have a definite talent for erotica. can't wait for your next story (part 2?).

Just one thing...

This story was amazingly well written and hot as hell but just when I was getting wound up, Marie and Cindy's diatribe about him fantasizing about Cindy while he fucked his girlfriend was kind of humiliating for Marie, I dunno, it kind of killed it for me :(

For the sake of my sanity, make it a series!

Why must good things come to an end!?
I loved their "game", I loved Marie's cuteness, and I loved how Cindy got her payback at the end. Poor Victoria. :(

WTF?

I got through the first page--what kind of a wimp is he? She challenged him physically, he doesn't have to be a "gentleman" any more, he can flip her over and go help his gf. That changes the story, but at least it's accurate--unless he IS a wimp. If the writer were a girl, maybe, but for a guy? I quit there. I won't vote, because it's his first, but improve or make it the last!

Awesome work

This is one of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica, most stories usually can't hold my attention for 5 pages but this one had me completely and totally enthralled. Please keep up the good work. Id love to see what is going on in Cindy's mind, since blackmail is clearly something she is considering...

I enjoyed your work and have voted 5*****

It is nicely done and very entertaining. Best regards, Jane

Awesome read!

Dude, you seriously need to write some more. This one is way too awesome to be your first and only story.

great read mate :) seriously keep up the good work

Fuck

I have never wanted a big, fat, juicy cock more in my life

Incredible!!!!!

Not much else to say. Very good!!! One of the best I've ever read.

wonderful

So well done I was shocked at how good it was
I will be fantasizing over this for quite a while
I hope you do more chapters with this

AWESOMEEEEEEEEE

This is easily the best sex story i have ever read,i love the teasing,the athletic,sexy girls,totally love Cindy...LOL,obviously the strong,dominate,fit,sexy one of the lot,i loveeeee the way she straddles Paul and press her hips down on him and teases him,then how the girls pin him down to test the toy on him and then i love how Cindy holds him down and rides him hard,strong and without mercy until he cums,DAMNNNN she's so fit,strong and athletic,i loveeeeee this story,i hope you post more stories with girls pinning down guys and forcing them to cum without mercy

You got a fan. A biiig one.

Somebody's got the writing skills allright :D The rhythm of the text was amazing. Written by someone else, this story could have ended up rather long-winded and monotonous with such an insane amount of passion and continuous drive, but you managed it. Can't wait to enjoy your other stories... After I recover ;) And btw, I want Cindy. Bad. Now. :P Props.
-SeIsoKissa

Victoria was a naive moron. "I'll tell Marie!" ??? Yeah, cuz when you have no control over what's happening to you, you suddenly have the resolve to bear it out because someone is going to tattle on you.

GREAT FUCKING STORY

LOVED IT! GREAT STORY WITH ENOUGH DETAILS IN IT TO MAKE IT BELIEVEABLE .KEEP THE STORIES CUMMING AND CUMMING AND CUMMING ! I KNOW I DID ! SEVERAL TIMES IN FACT .THANKS VERY MUCH !

Great story

one of the best I've ever read on here.

Against rule

You are posting cheating-force sex. That is against the rule. You cannto make a series to this.

0974F96

Excellent

Very well written. The energy is palpable. Super sexy scenario. 5 stars, favorited.

five stars definitely

i really want a sequel... please!

Incredibly hot story.

I loved the careful, but not too elaborate decriptions of the four teens' thoughts and reactions. Added to the arousal-factor immensely. I even liked the ridiculous female "logic" about what constitutes "cheating". I never thought I would get off on a story about a guy being restrained, but this worked for me like few others have.

One word to the idiots posting about "wimps" and "non-consent": if you are such a concrete-headed, comically "macho" horse's ass that, as a straight man, you couldn't just get off while three sexy teen girls give you a double bj and then two of them ride you to their orgasm and yours (even restrained), then you are just as mentally challenged as the guys who like to be whipped by a dominatrix.

Hot

I have read a lot of Erotica. This is my first time grading a story and commenting. This story popped over and over. Nice creativity.
Thanks!