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Attractive, but Sugary
Emulating the hero would be a goal of most of us! Having
a new grand-daughter I know how he feels about the baby.
Nicely written.
wonderful
just one remark : the chapters are too short and don't follow soon enough. But then the story would be over too soon. G.Belgium
Like it!
This is a good story! its building up! i like it! Cant wait for more! Thanks!!
Still Good
Liked it,keep them comeing, thanks!
well done
the story is coming along nicely. i like the pace and i hope you develop the relationship slowly; he is brokenhearted because his gf cheated on him, while she was probably abandoned by her bf. so they both need time to heal. good luck and i hope to read more from you.
Still enjoying it
He really is a good man to be keeping his promise to the baby. I'm interested to see what happens now that she's awake. Thanks for writing.
keep going...
very nice...angel ıs so good story...
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