All Comments on 'Dogging on Cannock Chase'

I have known you for a long time, and have always wanted to see you in print. Congratulations, and looking forwards to meeting you again on Cannock Chase (as well as other places, as you know)

This story was submitted under "First Time". I am at a loss to know why it was published as "erotic horror", as this has nothing at all to do with the subject!

STICK TO YOUR BEST FRIEND,SKIP,HE WILL BE THE ONLY PERSON INTERESTED IN THIS VERY UNSEXY,BORING STORY.

Well done! If anything, more clinical than erotic, but wet inducing nevertheless. It got my imagination running - as well as other parts of me!

I enjoyed your story, I thought it was different - well done. :)

Maybe that's the problem, they AREN'T "thinking"! This story has no business being posted under "Erotic Horror". I have had my own stories, that I requested to be posted in a certain section, end up being posted by the Literotica folks, in a story section where it doesn't belong. This leads to comments from people reading that section, looking for stories that fit that description, to slam a perfectly good story, just because it's posted in the WRONG section! Listen up people, the AUTHORS don't do this, the Literotica people do when they approve the story for publishing.

This is a pretty well written and told story, but it's more voyeuristic than "horror" and should have been posted in a more appropriate section.

Your story reflects your neat personality. True or fiction, it does not matter because it is unique, exciting and certainly not horror of any kind. Bob is a lucky guy. I wish I could witness and participate in one of your adventures. Keep writing. Your critics are just jealous and probably asexual.

What fun, but please be careful... I think it's illegal to exhibit oneself publicly... but I'm on my way to Cannock!!!

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Hello,

Loved your story, stayed hard all the way through, always a good sign. Written you an email too. Tom x

Hello,

Loved your story, stayed hard all the way through, always a good sign. Written you an email too. Tom x

What a hot tale, not clinical at all, but with just enough detail for the reader to fill in the gaps.

Just off for a little drive!

NOTHING KNEW FROM YOU JUST LIKE YOUR OTHER STORIES ONLY THIS TIME YOU ARE NOT FUCKING YOUR SON OR PERHAPS YOU DID? AFTER ALL YOU DON'T CARE WHAT OR WHO FUCKS YOU AS LONG AS SOMEONE OR SOMETHING DOES. YOU KNOW, DOGS, HORSES, ELEPHANTS, BULLS. SHEEP, GOATS. BUTCH DYKES WITH 20 INCH STRAPONS.ANYTHIGN TO FILL THAT HUGE WHOLE YOU HAVE BETWEEN YOUR LEGS. IT MUST SO BIG BY NOW SEEING AS YOU HAVE BEEN FUCKING SINCE YOUR 12 WAS IT?

More details. We love going to clubs and doing similiar things.

I wasn't even there but reading the story I've had a fabulous wank. Mmmm. Love to find out when you're up there again. Ansons bank?

The original thought behind this story would appear to have been a decent one. Unfortunately the telling of it is far too rushed. The potential was for a much longer account, maybe over two or three chapters. It lacks description, character development and scene setting. In essence it was a two minute quickie when we warranted a sensuous build up and throbbing climax. But don't give up. Keep writing, it's one way to improve. Also read other erotica.

Lost my password but Silverslacker70 enjoyed this. Rampant fucking is very sexy.

awsome and i admit i wanked off