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Coup de Amour

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by Angeline04/29/08

A good poem

with a focus (on D/s sex) that is light years better than the gazillion mediocre "Master" poems I've read here. I dunno, maybe the different (ie., the Dom's) perspective makes this more interesting. Certainly the images are powerful. I got a little confused by the uneven punctuation (coupled with the uneven initial caps/lowercases). Also, I thought "Emergent desire to be had" is weak because of the passive construction. Overall really good, though.

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.

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by 04/29/08

wow!

i love the mental image it draws. very hot and powerful.

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by cloudy06/19/08

again, very nice

I think I like the rawness (is that a word?) of this one, as compared to the more romantic vision in the other...but then, I'm twisted like that. Very nice.

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