All Comments on 'Coup de Amour'

with a focus (on D/s sex) that is light years better than the gazillion mediocre "Master" poems I've read here. I dunno, maybe the different (ie., the Dom's) perspective makes this more interesting. Certainly the images are powerful. I got a little confused by the uneven punctuation (coupled with the uneven initial caps/lowercases). Also, I thought "Emergent desire to be had" is weak because of the passive construction. Overall really good, though.

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i love the mental image it draws. very hot and powerful.

I think I like the rawness (is that a word?) of this one, as compared to the more romantic vision in the other...but then, I'm twisted like that. Very nice.