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by SadieRose05/03/08

Breathtaking

This is an astonishingly beautiful and intricate story. Given all the detail it almost feels like it should be the beginning of a fantastical novel, one gets the sense that it might not be the last encounter for the protagonist and his horse-hung foreign client, and that there are greater and more mysterious things in store for your central character than he could ever imagine. Deftly and arousingly written and thoroughly enjoyed by this reader. Thank you.
*genuflects*

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by sabb05/04/08

I Totally Agree

The previous comment says it all.

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by Lavonya03/09/13

I didn't get any of the words used.....

But I figured them out almost half way through....
Other than that it was GREAT!!!

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