All Comments on 'Snare'

This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>

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Such a slender poem that it doesn't have much of an opportunity to grab a reader's attention. If you remove "in the slipknot of sex" from the poem, you pretty much have a thin woman in a pantsuit. But when that phrase is added, the woman changes into a one-piece leopard spandexy thingy -- a tasteful one. :) Oh, the excitement.

To be as your coverlet, wet as

Zinnias on the last day of

April, plastered petal to chest.

Risen dawn and a ring of flowers

Announce your fragrance of readiness.

I'm not sure I can beat the strange wonderfulness of the anonymous comment here, so I'll just say:

Yow. Yum. As always.