by coaster2
Great and well put together. Reads well and Bill does appear to be a mans man. Look forward to seeing him grow.
to a great series, hopefully. A very tender description of Bill's first time. He had his own 'Mrs. Robinson' to lead the way (or for the 'American Pie' generation, it's "Stifler's mom"). Please continue to write, coaster. I hope you update Vinnie's story too (if I remember correctly, it needs a final chapter).
Wonderfully written. Beautiful job. Great narative and dialogue. I can't wait to read more.
I found myself totally involved with the story and its characters. I admire the way you crafted his background, growth, sexual awakening, etc. It all flowed very well, and I am looking forward to more. Michael
Well - aren't you something - a breath of fresh air this evening and much appreciated.<P>
You continue to climb as experience shows well on you. You have made the subject of a salt of the earth timid individual making his way into life quite interesting.<P>
I / we look forward to your next chapters Story Teller.<P>
With Very High Regard
The moment I saw your name on the story Coaster2 I had
to find time to read it. So far no pepper in the dish but
there was a nice description of his first time. Perhaps it
would be nice if he had some inner conflicts about his next moves.
I've read this before, but can't remember what happens.
Curious to see how it goes!
A willing and eager participant.
It can be wonderful for both parties.
The gentle, unassuming, inquisitiveness of young Bill was what I felt. Darla was the combination of forwardness and tenderness he needed.
I like sex education stories, and, although this did not really go into what was taught and how over the weeks of time, it was great in other ways. A breath of new air from the common college jock or nerd stories, or meetings in bars (not knocking them, but variety is nice). One thing lacking in many sex education stories is how he goes on to use his education with his peers or later partners. I sense that coming up.
A beautiful and somewhat overlooked sex education story is Educating Dustin Rhodes by Mindventure.
Lovely story,
Paul in Oklahoma